The next step in Mollie’s character arc begins in Chapter 5, where rumors have been spread about her interactions with the humans. This is further backed up by Mollie’s “mysterious pains” prevented her from working, and her hidden stash of sugar ribbons. It’s clear now to everyone in the farm, Mollie doesn’t plan to stay for much longer. After this accusation, Mollie confirms their suspicions, and leaves, finishing her character arc. From the beginning of the novel you see her selfish nature shine through the show pony exterior, revealing something not quite as pretty. You see Mollie’s obvious correlation with bourgeois, who fled to Germany after the Russian revolution began, clearly not committed to freedom. The similarities don’t stop there, however. Before the revolution had even begun, there were doubts about there privileges being taken. Then there was abandoning allies in times of need and stress, and finally, discarding it all together. Mollie’s arc ends in the same way, betrayal.
Really strong final paragraph. Try finding a direct quote from the text to back up your point for each of your paragraphs. Also pay a little closer attention to your spelling and grammar as there are a few minor errors along the way. Really good work Abby.